Writing Activity 3: Rough Draft

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Introduction paragraph

Adolescence at its infancy can be described as the hallmark curtain raising stage of scientific modernism of adulthood .This comes as a result of the fact that its unifies distinct age groups in both genders . However given the current studies, it has come to conclusion that as opposed to the expected outcome where, impressive credentials are regarded as the immediate sense of formality, there has been an outward turn of events coupled by exploratory, confident and agonistic characters this has prompted the involvement of different parties in revolution of this dawn.

Social recognition

We are moral beings to the extent that we are social beings .In the encompassed analogy ,teens in adolescence have a tenancy to undergo through behavioral conformation in respect to the cliques to which they serve and socialize with .This comes as an act of submission and discipleship to want to attract favors’ of fellow members’ as an act of recognition and devotion to the pacts laid down for them to follow . Some of the likely acts that they may decide to indulge in may include drug and substance abuse .As usual, gradual use of such lead to withdrawal hence involvement in acts of felony as the sanctuary for their misinformed decisions incase they lack immediate rehabilitation help from external parties .

Peer pressure

As discussed earlier ,given adolescence unifies different distinct age sets and groups ,the impact of peer attitudes is a major catalytic factor in the resultant use of drug and medication use. Certain attitudes have a straining aspect to the subject to which the pressure is encompassed to. To escape the frustration of fellow peers, adolescent teens may decide to indulge in some of the actions they are prompted to partake in order to satisfy the devastation that they are subjected to at the expense of conformity with the other individuals .Nonetheless if by chance they happen to get involved with adolescent teens with high morals, they are prone to shift and live responsibly. It is due to this unwavering uncertainty that an external party is indeed and important aspect in the morphing of adolescents since they are able to inflict good morals instead of the later obvious sort of asylum that will rather result into their self-distraction (Chen & Kandel, 2015).

Cultural fit

We live in a chauvinistic society thus adolescent siblings are expected to be formidable examples to their young siblings this pressure if not well contained may impose a mounted sense of pressure to the individual undergoing the phase .This therefore means that when push comes to shove where this receptive individuals are unable t meet the expected level of success ,they might end up and straying away since they are petrified with the thought that they would be a disappointment to their guardians and those who look up to them. Such level of devastation, may depress a couple of rational decisions that when made, given the prevailing cultural norms are regarded as complete disgrace (Kandel & Logan, 2014).It would therefore be an aspect of intellectual dexterity if the family of adolescent individuals would try to moderate their level of expectation and be there to offer adequate guidance in case of failure in different fields of pursuing success so as not to alleviate negative emotions that may massively orchestrate dauntless actions that they will afterwards regret.

Counter perspective

However much inculpable and deluded we want to pretend to be ,we must acknowledge that the most bureaucratic resolution we have not to jeopardize the future of our young adolescent teens is by providing the emotional sentimentality they so much desire to seek attention for .By doing this a lot of negative outrageous events can be coerced before they become numbingly tedious out of hand and thus difficult to control ,albeit it sounding naïve ,the degree of moral uprightness that could be embedded through support and care given to them during this trying phase serves the private interests of the desired outcomes since the conscious decision to be humble is instilled .In addition ,digital distribution adaptation and human transformation dictates that when greatly endeared tend to feel comfortable and thus try to conform with what is desired of them in respect to moral uprightness .

Conclusion

Simplicity is the ultimate sophistication; this simply means that if we are able to gradually invoke guidelines that would positively attribute to the early transformation of our adolescents before they enter this stage then we would have greatly influenced the modesty of the future attitude that they would have acquired along way their adulthood. Through documented prepense we are able to comfortably conduct the root cause with relentless pursuit of whatever reasons that may trigger redundancy of distraught behaviors’ amongst growing adolescents (Goldman, Genel Bezman & Slanetz, 2008). This enables us to realign our prospect in terms of unraveling why most of them resort to wallow in vices of felony given the clemency verdict we are able to acquaint ourselves with through the experience we go through during the study of belligerent individuals and scrutinize the major reason behind their choice of actions through assessing their previous adolescent experiences.

Feedback Reflection

The feedback reflection from the instructor from both activity 1 and 2 were instrumental and helpful in paragraph building of assignment 3.more expansion of the effects of adolescence and the prompting effects to them using drug medication use have been given proper insight and how viable measures could be undertaken to ensure that such actions would be coerced to prevent further future presentiments.

• Give an introduction statement on adolescents and drug medication use ,
• Purpose of different parties should be clearly explained.
• Avoid grammatical errors and proofread work.
• Writing activity 2 was good.

References

Harms., E. (2013). Drugs and Youth:The Challenge of Today. Elsevier.

Torregrossa., M. M., Barker., J. M., & Gourley., L. S. (2018.). Long-Term Consequences of Adolescents Drug Use. Frontiers Media SA.

Chen, K., & Kandel, D. B. (2015). The natural history of drug use from adolescence to the mid-thirties in a general population sample. American journal of public health, 85(1), 41-47.

Kandel, D. B., & Logan, J. A. (2014). Patterns of drug use from adolescence to young adulthood: I. Periods of risk for initiation, continued use, and discontinuation. American journal of public health, 74(7), 660-666.

Goldman, L. S., Genel, M., Bezman, R. J., & Slanetz, P. J. (2008). Diagnosis and treatment of attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder in children and adolescents. Jama, 279(14), 1100-1107.