Writing Activity 2: Starting Draft
ENG 215 – Research & Writing
Throughout the years, dieting has been encouraging for people overweight, diabetic patients, and others. However, the US Ketogenic diet has just become popular in the past few years.
Obesity has been one of the leading Illnesses in America for centuries.
“A recent survey of North American males found 42% were overweight, 34% were critically obese, and 8% ate the survey.” ― Banksy. Keto has been proven to help treat POC in women and to regulate sugar in diabetic people.
Carbohydrate can be good or bad, and it all depends on how you consume it
the NIH explains how to have a full complete diet you can drink some carbohydrates, and some are not consumable
there are some foods that people can be allergic to, and it can cause other illness
There are plenty of different diets in the world. but Keto has proven to be more effective
Many dieticians have approved ketogenic diet to their patient due to the high quality and results that this has
Doctors still believe balancing eating is the way to go
Counter Perspective: Keto is not for everyone
Response to Counter Perspective: it can cause a vitamin deficit if people do not replace it
Thus, some do not agree with the keto diet. It has proved to be successful in the everyday life of some athletes. However, people need to understand healthy eating should be a priority
Working Thesis Statement
Keto diet has been known in the past to help regulate blood sugar on diabetic people because carbohydrates can be good or bad depends on how you consume it, It is an easy way to start your weight loss journey, and it can help lead a healthier life.
Humans are attracted to fast food because it’s easy and convenient. Sometimes that can lead to unhealthy habits and even comes to death if not controlled in time. Keto diet has been known in the past to help regulate blood sugar on diabetic people because carbohydrates can be good or bad depends on how you consume it, It is an easy way to start your weight loss journey, and it can help lead a healthier life.
The majority of people will not commit to a diet in general. They may think it is not worth it due to economic reasons or not having time at all. Keto diet is based as we call it a low- carbohydrate diet that includes low carbs food. Dietitians usually offer this to people that suffer from POC or diabetics.
Feedback from Writing Activity 1:
1- to give more details about my essay 2- It was not well explained 3- too many grammatic errors
How Feedback Was Used:
I used it to spend more time on developing my idea and clearly explain what my argumentative side will be about
How Feedback Will Help You with Future Writing:
It will help in matters on structures. and how much more time I need to take on doing a paper